申请文书是留学前的必选项,然而世界名校的申请文书抛出的“变态问题”层出不穷,简直是烧脑,烧脑,再烧脑!
唯有“跃然纸上的欣喜”才能打动招生官,才能从众多申请者中脱颖而出,可见一篇好的申请文书在成功申请院校上具有极高的比重。
那么,如何才能写出高质量的留学文书?金矢留学窦老师用案例告诉你:
请看题:provide a creative response to the image below.(400 words maximum)
这有点类似我们的“看图说话”,拿到这样的题目有的同学可能是一脸问号,我是谁,这是啥,发生了什么?
面对如此“变态题”,金矢留学窦老师是如何解题创作的呢?一起往下看。

以下是沈阳金矢窦老师的作答:
One thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity are packed into ships serving as a haven for survivors of some cataclysm.
Unable to survive on the land or even to fish, they are essentially trapped in a prison on the sea. Though this is seemingly a return to Earth"s primitive status, she no longer retains her original beauty and is instead a tarnished version.
Once overflowing with flora, green water, and bountiful resources but now this is a fading memory. Our elders reminisce about the forests and farmlands covering the land, the blue sky with white clouds, the full moon and visible patchwork of stars, varied species residing on the planet, and the general vibrancy all around. The middle aged complain how their busy lives is a constant state of cutting forests for new land, spraying pesticides to increase crop production, and feeding poultry with these grains and they question whether the pursuit of material things was really worth it. The young are sorrowful that they have never seen the home described by the old. Nowadays, winter is getting warmer and warmer; the haze is getting more and more serious. Pollution overflows and animals are disappearing. If a child asks, "What is green?" none will think this odd.
The more painful the experience, the deeper the understanding. After enduring tragedy, humanity finally began to wake up to their plight. They planted flowers and trees with seeds they had and moved to ships in order to cultivate the crops on barren land. Full of hope, they prayed desperately that the earth would recover and that life would once again thrive. When the edge of the deep sea turned green, the children danced happily, the adults burst into tears excitedly, and the old people smiled thankfully. Hope was restored and all people were imagining what the planet of the future would appear as.
As the cradle of life, Earth provides humanity with the resources to prosper here. We can't let the earth linger for the sickness of her body, and be angry for the greed of human beings. We can't let the beauty of the past just become a long-term memory. The deteriorating environment has already sounded the alarm, and we can’t wait to be asked, “What have we left for our descendants?” thousands of years later.
解析思路:这篇文章从中文和英文来说都是不可多得的一篇美文。对于招生官和欣赏角度来说,都让阅读者眼前一亮。文章勾画了地球的美丽,但也延伸了现状,这是全球共同面对的环境、资源问题。
虽然考题具有相当难度,但它无疑带给人们更积极的思考和正能量,所以对于申请留学的学生来说,要充分了解世界名校的招生需求--吸引更多具有国际视野的优秀学生,亦是我们经常强调的高度、宽度、广度,要匹配美式思维逻辑。
希望这篇文章能为准备出国的学生和家长带来更正面的影响,申请文书只是预备出国的一个前奏,但始于留学成功,结果于成功留学,这是截然不同的目标。
每一个能成功申请到心仪世界院校的学生,都将在异域的文化氛围中获取更多的知识,打开看世界的窗户,成为国际型人才。
本次小编公布此篇400词申请文,窦老师于2019年1月初所作。
注:因申请文书涉及申请人的隐私,我们今天拿出来的这篇,是因为题目的特殊性,不含任何申请人个人隐私内容。
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